Omg.. i love the way u wrote it.. i feel like i was there !!! verrryyy good!!!! :)

That was way cool. Definitely better than a similar one I wrote called 'One Night Alone' I think. But this had great flow and great images. Cool write. Really cool content and just an overall interesting piece that kept the reader hooked throughout.
~Fallen

Wow this is a really good poem.. it is very descriptive, dark, deep.. the rhythm and flow of it was perfect and you did an amazing job on this! I loved it from beginning to end!

AWESOME, AWESOME,AWESOME!!!!! That was so amazingly awesome!!! Soo CREEPY! Man, that was soo awesome, I have shivers!!!! Awesome awesome AWESOME!!!

~~ALISSA

Wow kelly that was good...we need to start writing on here agagin like we used too...u know on my poem that has over 250 comments...and they are all of me u jaimie and bonnie....ahh the good old days...well hit me up later love you...and where were u today?