That piece of writing is beautiful & please keep writing babe, u have a lot of talent.
but hey chuck me some feed back for my poems 2 if u could.XoxoxoxoX.

Ur a good writer thanx for ur comment i love you poems keep up the good work

I liked it...

skrewed up but i really like it as my lifes messed up the same way.

october xx

That was very pretty... it happens to everyone doesnt it? its just how life is i guess... u just got to do some thinking on your own and figure things out... hope u get through this. keep up the great writing!

I can totally relate, thats what my guy did 3 times, yeah and i still went back to him and you know what? i dont regret it one little bit cause it has made me a stonger person, anyways great poem! i love it!
XOXOXO
Kamille
P.S. come check out my poem called DO YOU STILL........

Good poem..but yeah i been through that stage a lot and yes i can see that you were confused at that time. i hope you didn't go back with him. but yeah anyways good poem

I totally get this, it's really good. keep it up!! thnx for the comment, it meant a lot to me.

*Shawte*

Hmm..I was touched by your words. I've been through something similar before. I say, if the guy used you once, don't let him do it again. No matter how much you might think you care about him. He'll probably just end up using you again. And I don't want that to happen to you, cos it happened to me before. And I know how much it sucks! Well, that's just my advice to you. It's all up to you really.

Great job expressing yourself! I love it!

-Rona