Hey I hope my advise helped you and I really liked this poem a lot. I hope you solved your problem with your friend. And I hope you spoke your mind. I wish you well and please keep writing such beautiful poetry. well cya later, Kimberly

I liked that one, it was very good, you are very talented, you have a lot of skills...

**meggie**

"Thinking theres just nothing. . . "
there's needs an apostrophe.
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I thought that this poem was very sparse and concise, but I think that it lacks details and imagery. It is a bit better off than other sad poems in that there is a definite story behind it, but I don't think that you tell the story enough, and I don't think that you describe things in as much detail as you should. I can understand that one of this poem's strengths is its sparse prose, but I think that it'd improve with a bit of beefing up.

Oh wow, this is a GREAT poem.
It makes me kinda sad though, because I know what it's like to have a friendship ruined because of a different relationship.
but great poem!
5/5
Oh, and I hope you two get things figured out soon. =]