Wow great choice of words. i love the way you wrote it too. really good.. keep it up

This is sad come on honey and smile! 5/5 though i think its good

OMFG this poem is so ...... GREAT it is so sad at the same time i love it! keep it up ~...:::10/10:::...~

Razors_edge

P.S please check out some of my poems and quotes it will eman alot. Thanks.

Good one...more detail...

lissa

Aye Que lIndo very triste