Thats a really good poem! keep up the good work!

I love this poem...it's so sweet, and well written. Keep writing. Good job! 5/5

Wow that was really good! i loved the flow and the emotion put into this poem

If only you knew about
Half the things I feel
If only you could see how
What I say is real.

^ wow so great, and i can relate to this so much! great job... 5/5 from me, and thanks for the comments!