Wow.. i love how you keep repeating that line.. it rilly creates a great affect! i really like this poem.. it makes you think.. keep it up!
jessy

This was good. Good topic too. It could have gone on forever. The flow and rhyming were okay. But I loved how you worded it. So great job! 5/5

`taleee xx

This was a very good poem. You know, when bad or sad stuff happens, it leaves room for a beautiful poem. It connects with the readers in many ways, because a lot of people go through the same things. Well, this was a good poem and keep on writing and smiling :)

Nice poem
keep up the good work

I loved this! it speaks so true to stuff that everybody goes through and even if they dont they understand it!

~bobbi

I love it. It really grab the attention of the reader cuz it's stuff that some many people feel. You are reallly good with words. 5/5

This poem makes it easy for people to relate to, though there were some parts that if you reread it you can seewhere you might be able to take some words out here and there. And when I got to the knife part I thought it wa sgoing to be another cutting poem, luckily it wasn't. But either way, good writing as usual.

Wow....that poem is really good,you can tell, that it came from your heart i give you a 5/5..awsome job-Katie