Awww.. thats so sweet! :) he SOO doesn't deserve you! i love the repitition of "always" it really adds depth to the poem! keep it up!
jessy

Hey another lovely poem! keep up the gr8 work!

Aw.. that is really sweet.. It's short but holds a lot of emotions. Great job on this. It's hard to write a love poem, but you did good on it, it isn't cliched like most of the ones I've read. Great job!