Wow this is rly god. it paints a very clear picture in your mind. well done!

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Aww thats a rather cute little poem!
very good such a sweet and inocent emotions i dont think iv ever read anything on here expect sad poems lol well this one is great and ill have to do more of it wont i! :D
5/5
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Alice
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Very endearing, and summery. I love the light airy feel to the poem. Makes you feel like you are in a loving close knit town. Like gilmore girls. =) good job 5/5!