Wow... I really like this poem. It's deep and holds a lot of meaning. It captures the readers full attention and it's as though the words leap off the page... in a manner of speaking. I can relate to some aspects of the poem... although I can't say I fully relate to it coz everyone os different. Anyhow keep up the good writing... BRILLIANT> 5/5 =) xoxo

Hi Sammib, greatly expressed indeed, I loved everything about this poem, i cannot wait to read more. Timothy r

Hey, i thanks for the comment, i really like this poem its really good. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! God Bless

Much Love,
*Jessica*

I like ur way of expressing...
keep it up
God bless u

I really loved this poem..you did a great job on it girl, keep up the good work!!! your're great xox nelle

This is very good! Your a fantastic writer!!

Wow you fill it up with good emotions and lots of meaning great stuff i like that you make this poem good by the rhyme keep it up sammib

Such emotion
Im lovin it =P
Keep up the good stuff hun

This was really good Sammi, you used emotive writing, and twisted the mind of the readers by talking about the concequence of your actions. And then twist it to how it may effect your relationship...

Good write. No critique here.

Wow i like your new stuff , this poems deep ane excellent with lots of emotion , all your stuff is great anyway but this is ace , please see my new stuff first judgements killed her and Mmm guitar guy , thanks