It was awesomeand really good.

Nice pome but realy you shouldnt think that way no one should I shouldnt, I should'nt no no one but we can't help how we feal or think. I feal what you feal you feal what I feal.

This poem has alot of emotions in it but me and you are in the same boat the thing i want and need is death so.....Hi im sweet cheeks and i hope we can talk more

It was really good I remeber when I get really depressed thats how I would think I would wish my death but it would never happen. I liked your poem alot. 5/5

Hey angie .... i really like this poem angie... honest and longer... it was good and i liked how you kept repeating the death line... did you notice my reference in High School as a Rebel... wilson inspired me... lol... see you tomorrow

There's something not exactly great about it. The whole repetition did work but perhaps it was just the word choice. It was good not great. The emotions within was well done though.
~Fallen

Did you vote on my poem Good bye My love i got coments but only one vote lol

You let yourself feel to much
Great poem though.

I have felt the same way many times before so I can not bring myself to scold you to hard but you must promise me one thing, that you will be here when I come back and I promise that I will come back I will miss your comments, poems, and e-mails while I am gone

-goodbye Cody

Hey it's paula read and commment rate whatever mine please thnks by the way i think that poem was really good and it came straight from the heart thats awesome
seeya
paula

I think the words came from you heart

but you sound like a very tatlanted young girl who needs to live just to wright poems

i loved the poem and it made me sad
feeling emotions when reading poems is they best way to read them

well done
5/5
try and keep your head up grl

lana

I wish you didn't feel this way, but I guess you're entightled to your thoughts. I hope you see soon the plans that are laid out for you!! 5/5, and as was already said, keep your head up!!
In my thoughts and prayers,
Kristen
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