WOW! That was excellent. You such an inspiration.

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

Omg god thats still how i feel.. man it been 9 months and still ain't over it.

This poem seemed like it could be a really cool song if it was put to music.
the repeation was good and the free form really worked well

Nice job on your poem. Very sad.

Look at me right now
Standing all alone
Watch me as I fall
Watch me as I burn

I liked this stanza.
Take Care Cindy

Thanks guys!!!!
Its really appreciated :D