Comments : Did I do something wrong?

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica Sharon LaPointe

    I Like this . its so good.. Don't worry. Love will find you. I lost the one I love to. and I still love him after a year and a few months. Good luck

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Ahhhhhhhh thta is so cute i really like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was good. Not mind blowing or anything like that. Also in the third stanza you forgot a word in front of flash, in case you care. It'll have a better flow for that line then. But overall this was something that kept interest and didn't get all wordy. The last stanza was really cool.
    ~Faith-less