Wow... that was an amazing poem, it is so good! i love it a lot, you are a very amazing writing you can feel every single bit of emotion within it, if you could comment on some of my poems it would mean a lot.
Love cass xoxo

Do you have aim are anything?

That is pretty! and sad. i lost my daddy when i was 6. :(

If u want u can im me on ither of my sn's their imalamawotwot and bmxpunk003 so if u wanna talk on there u can if u want

You are so right kids need both parents. you`re dealing with a lot.
I think your poems would read a little better if you put them in lines,like
I see you walking
I see you talking etc.
your content is very good,it would just read a little easier