Tim - this is really beautiful. Man do you have a way with words. Your writing is so descriptive its like the reader is feeling what you feeling. Really beautifully written.

Godbless
Sammib

Beautifully written, Tim.
You are such a gifted poet. Each poem you write is like a journey through whatever your feeling at the time. You have a talent at thrusting the reader into your mind set, which is amazing.
There is so much of this poem that I absolutely adore...here's a few lines that touched my heart:

"Must you be so harsh in my sorrow"

"Can you forgive me for words unsaid
Our bond now permanently broken
Will you erase the pain from my head
The memories of thoughts unspoken"

Poetic genius as always my dear friend. I love you dearly and hope everything works out for you~Holly

Wow... that was an amazing poem, it is so good! i love it a lot, you are a very amazing writing you can feel every single bit of emotion within it, if you could comment on some of my poems it would mean a lot.
Love cass xoxo

Man dude, that was so cool. The flow incredible. The words were definitely great. Just well done. Very cool write. No overly shown faults which makes it even better.
~Fallen

Aw.. that is really sad. It's something that I, and I'm pretty sure many others, can relate to it. You described everything very well & the flow and rhythm was really good. Great job on this!

Hi T,

this poem was so beautiful, it really touched me so much when I read it, I know you put a lot of heart into this when you wrote it, I felt it through every word.

Take care, Lis

He can and He will.

Jut beautiful!

*~Melody~*