Comments : Real Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I'll watch and love you in my private world.
    But please just leave me be.
    I've told you before.
    The real me you will never see."

    Very sad ending.. It's sad when we can't share ourselves, flaws and all with someone. I've been there..
    Great poem thought, brilliant wording
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    !! thts really good!! i love it!

    *shawte*