U shud all so kno he dsnt deserve ur love if he can't love u bak!

That is really sad.. I can definitely relate to it. The flow and rhythm of this is really good and held up well.. It is filled with emotions and sounds like it came straight from your heart.. which makes the best poems. Great job on this!

Again, great use of repetition in this; that, and the format worked really well together. A touching write on a similar subject as your other poems.
I didn't understand the line "The side of yours" it isn't a complete statement, or you have made a mistake there. Good job.