Hey nice poem

That is really good and something that I'm sure many people can relate to.. I hope that everything works out for you! You did a great job on this!

I think this is a good start but you have some mistakes with tenses in there. I don't want to rewrite your poem for you, but if you want me to give more improvement suggestions, just let me know.
Sometimes you don't know what is there until it's gone, and sometimes you're just too late, I agree. Well done.