Hey chear up! life has somethin sweet and lovely in store 4 u!

That is really sad.. I like the way that you started it out happy but ended it with a sad stanza.. you did a great job on this! Keep it up & stay strong.. everything happens for a reason!

A sweet poem... or should I say a "sweet and lovely poem."
I liked your use of repetition, it worked well. I think maybe a more creative vocab could be used to describe certain things in the poem.
"Walking my self is one of the joyful moments" doesn't make sense to me, so I'm thinking maybe you meant "Walking by my self is one of the joyful moments."
I thought the ending was sad, but also a bit sudden, maybe something could be done to break the transition from wishing for something "sweet and lovely" to happen to them saying goodbye.
Nice write anyway, keep it up.

An adorable poem ^_^ Just figured I'd point out you have the strange symbols in it( like when you copy apostrophes) lol I hate it when that happens. I really enjoyed the repetition, sometimes its boring but the way you use it makes it interesting and thats a great trait.
I agree with Silver that the end was a bit sudden but it still conveys such emotion. I very much enjoyed this poem.
Keep writing, keep smiling,
Kim