Comments : She`s Gone

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Such a sad poem Dave, I especially love these two lines:

    I cant believe my eyes! you walk away just to make me cry!
    All alone i`m here! just me with my glass of tears!

    beautiful. Take care, Lis

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Nice note of optimism in the end. very well written.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana