Omg like this one at frist i was think aw i feel the same way but at the end oh not me i still like it though good job david

Lovely and not expressed too much it had balance and i liked that :):):)
could you comment on my poems please i like as much feedback as poss thnx xxx alex xxx

Again, nice. I love it Lata

Its cute........

Awwww sad... but very good. i really lke the emotion put in this.. u have talent... ur only 13 wow.. ne ways great poem. keep it up
take care
angie

DANG man!!!!!!! This poem is tight =! I LOVE it (of course!) LOL! You got skills do, no doubt about that man!!!!! You raw Joker!

I really like your style of writing.

Wow that is great sad but cute

Awe david u know i love u