I remember this poem so well, it's what landed you on my favorite's list. It's also one of the main reasons I wanted to get to know you....
I don't really know where to start at commenting on the poetic aspect of this piece. It's flawlessly written. The passion and longing conveyed in each line is absolutley mind blowing. And just when you think it can't get any better, along comes the ending....an explosion of poetic perfection!
Thanks for reposting this, it reminds me of what I already know...
Love ya~Holly

I think Holly said it all t this is a true masterpiece...its perfect.

Take care, Lis

My god!! this is a book! you are so descriptive, comparing yourself to a book, this is my favorite poem so far, I cannot wait to read more. Denise

Glad to see you post this again!

This time leave it! :)

I love and totally agreee with Holly when she says "an explosion of poetic perfection!" This poem is absolutely wonderful. Comparing your live's love to a book that you wrote only for that special person is just.. pure brilliance~ I love this poem! It's convinced me to add you to my favorites. Great job!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

This is a nice and wonderful poem...
good job!(°∀°)b

Omg this is a great poem...5/5. keep up the good work.

This is touching and filled with beauty, every stanza is greatly written.
I like this piece a lot, it sounds like it's written straight from the heart which gives extra intensity and effect to it.
You did very good job with rhymes too and made great flow in this piece.
Keep up!

I use the same style for my writing, so i enjoyed the similarities, but i really liked how u used a book to tell something different than the story...
well written, keep writing
tim

This is awesome.. not expecting for you to be the book, but as i kept reading i understood completely.. and tht is sooo awesome.. i havent really seen tht done b4 its kl... awesome poem loved it xD 5/5

Um......... good poem

Um......... good poem