This line was so true:

"Like the colors of the leaves
She changes every season"

the pen was right ;)

keep it up!

Thanks for the comment on mine, as I see you write about a broken heart too.

I really liked this one, it was short but it said much more. Beautifully written and great work. 5/5

that was just beautiful... once again..
butta nice job that is great..

Wow...harsh! I loved how you had a "conversation" with your pen, very imaginative. I liked it alot 5/5

Great flow and nice poem keep it up... poem not too longer but its so sweet and express a lot..5/5

I really like this poem. what it was saying and all. so good. 5/5

~Kristina

Awww. This is such a wonderful poem. you're a talented writer. You've got some of the best poems I've ever read! It was not easy to find one I havn't already commented. Keep it up! 5/5 You're deffinatly going in my favorites! God Bless.

~*Tay*~

Wow. Short- but it says it ALL. 5/5

I love how you compared a person to the changing of the seasons. 5/5

Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

It was nice but short XD

Written beautifully.