Wow.. i like that! it really makes you think.. :) i love the last stanza, its a perfect ending for your poem! keep it up!
jessy

Its really a pity to see such beautiful poem having such low votes, this is really a remarkable poem dear...so true and so beautifully written
great write indeed

all the best and take care

Gr8 work. sry u didnt win my other contest, i still really liked ur poem tho