That was rlly good. the repetition was kool....nice job, ive experienced this b4.....i hope it lasts...i cant believe u dont hav more comments!!its so good...
love ya lots,
sore

I LOVE THIS POEM

What a beautiful poem! I can tell you really put a lot into it and it came from inside. I love it! Keep it up, gurliee!

Thanks so much for commenting on my poems!
Haley

It's really beautiful You are a great writer!

thanks for the comment,

x x x x x x

Wow that is seriously one of the most amazing love poems iv ever read! aww i so wish i could write like this its an amazing write =]
stay strong and keep up the good work ^^
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxx
&&thanks for the comment =]

Great work, i love all of ur works so far, how come i never seen u b4??? lol... anyways i been missing out on sum great poems!!! keep it up 5/5

Awesome. love it juss like all ur others.