OOh this is ammmmmmmmmmmmmazing love. you are so good at these ¬¬ lmao
ooh i have your safety pin with green fluff on it that you dropped in my car!!
i lovee yoooou sooooo muchly =D
and that arm in zee poem better not be yours ! :]

This is beautiful
in a disturbing way
wonderful work
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Wow.... I am speechless, that was so alive I could almost feel the pain tht you have experinced. I think partically because I can really relate with it so well. I hope your doing better soon.
God Bless
Renee

Wooooooooww, your are so good at this! im like ... bleh i write complete crap compared to this! love you!
lovelove zee tom boi!
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Have you really been hurt this bad?

Great poem! i loved it! 5/5 keep up the good work!!
x!xzoex!x

THIS WUZ REEEEALLY GOOD!
SERIOUSLY!
anyway, thanx 4 the comment...u should really hear the original song by Rihanna..i love it....well, again, thanx....
heart dee dee

Good poem! All the words went great together and everything! Thx for the comment! 5/5 Plus, you are on my favorites now too! Lol

-Steph-

THE BEST

This is a great poem!!!!!! All the words flowed so nicely! I like how everything makes sense. I love it in a disturbing way, but I can relate cuz yeah.........
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I really like it and I give you a 5/5!

Thanks for the comment!

~*~Cindy~*~

So sad. I feel kind of the same. I used to think about suicide, but now I don't care no more. I do not suffer from life. But life gives me nothing to hang on to either. I'm not afraid to die, if someone killed me, It would be a favour. But I cannot kill myself, and let others pay for it. I know they love me even if they don't show it to me. and what I'm trying to say is, that you're also loved. People care about you. ask them, and you'll see.
best wishes // Joyo

Oh good! This one has...damn!!...heart, soul, memories and a lot of stuff. Great! 5/5 you've been doing pretty good as i see.

Thx for the comment, i try to always return the favor.

Charlie

Wow and u said my poem was good this is good to the max i give this a 97 thousand out of 5 jeez this is totally amazing u are such a better writter then me jeez~love you bunches must talk to u sometime ~brittness

Awesome poem... i really like it.

jamie

You poem spoke to me in so many ways i wish i had your skills

Its amazing how people can feel the same, and not even realize it and think they are the only one. definetly a good write..love lots, Kj

Wow so i can soo relate to this.. i luv it, your an awesome writer

Wow thats a good poem good job and thanks for the comment !!

I love it. It is an amazing poem. It expresses so much emotion. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work
xoxo
Megan

Its kinda a badawsome poem
not what its about but how its writen sicknasty job! i like it!!