Aw this poem is really sad.. It's just a father's love of his daughter I guess.. You did a great job on this. The flow and rhythm of it was good & you worded it really well.. Great job on this! Keep it up!

Good wrok ....awesome.
kendra meyer

I like this poem a lot and i love the way you are with your words...i hope you make it far in life....cause you deserve it....

Awww.. i like that! :) that was very sweet! keep up the excellent work and keep asking ur grandpa why! :P
jessy xox

Wow, An amazing poem. I loved it. The flow and ryhme was great. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Excellent poem, its based on a true story? I love that

Everything seemed alright as if you were talking to him without it coming off as a complete narrative.

Wonderful job. It reminds me of the saying, "Daddy's little girl"

Awww. It was sweet. The fact that it was based off of something real makes it that much better. Keep up the good work.

-ifihide11

Wow..this was an amazing poem. And I loved it. I guess the answer to your question can only be a fathers love for his daughter. Only the ones who have children of theire own will understand this unconditional love. Once I had my little babygirl I realized that my life would never be the same, and no matter what that little creature did in her lifetime, nothing would ever make me love her any less. That`s what parents are here for. Great job with this poem. Keep it up ;)