Great job, darlin'.. an' thank ya kindly fer commentin' my poem.. it means lot to me..

5/5
Kyle

P.s. Why don't you PM me sometime, 'kay partner?

I tried writing a poem for my mother..but it didnt turn out right..great job...!!

Excellent.
I can't say much because its hard to put into words how deeply this poem has touched me.
No praise from me could do this poem justice. I can't even scratch the surface.
Its wonderful that you love your mother so much, It makes me wish mine was still here.

1,000,000/5

I completly agree with Josh. Its an amazing poem, its flows really nicely. I love reading poems exactly like yours because everything reminded me of my mom, and what she would have been like from things i here. So its amazing absulotly wonderful. Keep it up