Wow i must say this poem really got to me seeing as how I do smoke, even though I do want to quit. You did a great job on this & I hope that everyone reads this & sees the harms that smoking can do. Great job!

I loved it it was excellent.. great work 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I luv this poem! Just da way u worded it! It's so cool! If only the people that realli needed to know read that..well done! 5/5!