Not quite what I hoped for, oh well. =(

Enjoy

Wow. I really liked this one...I've felt this way before. I don't remember in great detail, but it definitely did spark a few memories.
My favorite stanza would have to be:
"My heart beats in time,
In time with every drop that hits the ground.
...When I see you.
Only when I see you."

The last stanza was as well amazing, but the one I selected was my most favorite, because I've felt this way before...a lot, and I remember it. Very well done, I think it's my new favorite...but I am undecided. Take care, dear.

Much love,
- -SJG