Holding on tight
On such a beautiful night
Loving you
Doing this all right

^Awww.... I truly love this part. it say so much n it just so beautiful.

In a hurry
Not a problem
Going home, to love you more

^nice flow.

On this wonderful night
Not until you kiss me once more

^saying that this nite can get wonderful with one of ur kisses? idk i sorta got lost.

The light go out
In an instant
Going hard
Holding tight
Till the crack of dawn

^hmm.. intresting way of ending your piece here. i like it. didnt get that small part there. but u did rite it amazing.

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TaKe caRe,
Frenchy