You write so well! i dont know many 15 year olds that have such a wide vocabulary, your rhyming is excellent, i can never be sure what the last word of the next line will be. most people stick to the same words, and it becomes boring because you can tell whats coming next. for example more often than not 'life' is always paired with 'knife'. however i have to admit that i am slightly hypocritical, because i am very much guilty of doing that, which i am going to try and stop doing. |