Nice

Good poem. Keep it up.

That's a wonderfull way of describing the hope for love,
pain and hope and the strenght to go on ,
seems more like a little story about the desire for love no?
you can feel the emotion and desire in it
really good, like it alot

This poem is awsome.. and i like the way u put that on my poem.. that is a good way of wording it...lol.. but very good poem.. keep it up