Liked it alot, really good,, good view on poetry

It's one view on poetry. This feels alot like a narrative in a way but some of the lines felt as if they were leaning toward what poetry really is. Nothing seemed forced, which is good. Nothing really could, should, be taken out either.

It flowed very well and it didn't sound forced, its an excellent first draught and the sentiment is ace but i think it might need a bit of work-titivating. Ignore if you want . Sorry if i'm being harsh.Well Done
All the Best
Sondos

I really liked the flow here, its also written very well, I will read more soon. Thanx, Timothy r

WoW! i liked that alot! it was veryy good! :) and it was a very unique idea too! keep up the good work! 5/5
jessy

This is really good. despite the fact that im very into writing with insane imagery. but i like this but its true(mostly lol) and it flows really well and teh rhyme is great. nice job!

Well, I must say, if you beeing a bad writer is a reality, I'd rather live in a fantasy world.

First of all i have to say amazing stanza.. it was definitly my fav

I'm bored of writing poetry,
engulfed in all my cries.
I have to step into reality,
where my poetic talent lies.

2nd of all the rhyme was great, and the flow went along nicely great work keep it up !! 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I think its great. WRite abou tht ewriting process? why not. You should know all about it by now. I loved that. I hated the rhyme scheme. I personally couldn't stand it. Thought it hindered the poem, dragging it down far below what it is worth and didn't allow you to state everything you might have wanted as clearly and concisely as you wanted. I think you could turn it into a pro rate job if you shredded your rhymes and just wrote the same thing with much of the same words and ides in a paragraph form.

Wow that was gr8. i thot it was very clear, loved it. 5/5

Love the third stanza, it describes poetry well. KEep it up

Great poem, more of an outlook on how poetry is i'd say. Great though none the less.

I'm bored of writing poetry,
engulfed in all my cries.
I have to step into reality,
where my poetic talent lies.

Was a great stanza. Great way to start it off. 5/5

~Caught in this pain again~
~*Bryce Dressler*~