Very good

Wow this is beautiful. It's absolutely heart wrenching, and I, along with a lot of other people, can relate to this. You bring the feeling alive, which may sound bad, but it's truly a compliment, because you made us, the audience, feel what you felt. That's talent :)

Your poem is amazing, I love it. Your description of an important moment in your life is beautifully written.

Great job! 5/5

This piece was written nicely. My favorite part was the description of him walking out of your life. I got a vivid image of him walking away--nice touch. I thought the end was a little bit choppy and didn't flow as nicely as the beginning, but the last line brought it all back together. Good job:)

Beautiful writings..
Excellent thoughts..
Marvelous outlooks..
Fantastic feelings..
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Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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Nazeer

Wow..it was great...the way..u wrote it..is too specific...and detailled... i like the flow..and the emotions..
and u are beautiful...like ur poems...

Wow. This is a deeply emotional poem. It just got to me..you know those poems that you read and you feel like you could have writen yourself because they were your excact feelings at some point in time.
I love the whole description in this. The reader can really visualise.
My favourite part was:

"I couldn't follow you with my eyes, any longer,
but I had no idea that my heart had left with you."

^those lines are so beautiful..and so true. I LOVE the whole poem. Amazing work! =] keep it up.
--Viola

This poem reminds me of a high school crush I had for the longest time... besides that, I love how you word this poem. It shows how even after so many years, you still want to know what could have been. Thanks for sharing. :)

5/5

I have few words to describe this poem. With such few words, you've managed to give me a picture of a heart-breaking scene, one I have experienced myself. Breathtaking. 5/5