Yesh Yesh Yesh! Awesome! Loved it again how you repeated that same stanza. It was really captivating. Another awesome job by the wonderful Steph! WOOOOOOOOT for Steph!! Taha. Keep writing though, I really like your work. I can relate alot. 5/5

`taleeee xx

Wow, what can i say? It's amazing and i believed every word of it. You're sooo good

Speechless, just speechless. yeah i know it makes a change for me. just shows how good you really are!
another 5/5

Can i just say that you should consider sending some of your writing to an artist as they would make very good song lyrics and you have put so much feeling in them. just a thought. you honestly do have such a talent. this poem is so strong but you are very brave for writing this down, well done and take kare xxxxxx