You were in army training? I've had a bit of training myself, it's not a walk in the park. It's a march in the dessert. Horrific stuff. Anyways, this was a good poem, again, great imagery.

Yeah man, I'm in the army. Thank you for your reply.

Wow- honestly- wow, i felt like i was watching it more than reading it, great poem, and by my poem I hope you didn't get the impression that I don't support and love our troops- it's the whitehouse, and the government, and congress

Awesome! I just wanna say thanks for fighting for our country! I am leaving in less than a week for basic training for the National Guard so i am excited but in a way kinda sad to be leaving my family!

Hey, i have a close cousin in the army, and he always talks about not believing everything that he has seen, and not believing that it was actually him doing all the things that he had to... to hear some one turn it into a poem like this really means something.

You are a good writter and i read you thing in the discussion board under love and romance. im so sorry things happend like that for you. I am having some problems myslef. Take care and you are a good writter.

Great Poem! I love it as it described everything so well. I'm sry for all the things you've had to experience, but keep up the great work. Your poetry is awesome

Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!!