Very good. I hope you don't mind, I only voted 4/5 (although some of your other work got 5/5 from me.. lol), because I couldn't see the continuity without any punctuation. I don't know if it was meant to be hurried, but that's how I read it without stops or commas. Maybe, to slow it down a little to the reader, you might want to think about it? Certainly no critiscisms, though, I absolutely love this poem. It's so vivid, and true. I think in our darkest hour, when something so emotional has happened to us, you can relate to it with your words. Thankyou for a fantastic write. xx

I loved this poem.. I tell alot of pepole that I do but this one touched my heart. I rated you a 5/5. Keep up the good work.