Comments : ROTTON THROUGH AND THROUGH

  • 18 years ago

    by Logan

    "You are the scum and slime from hell.
    To the Devil himself you gave up your soul to sell."
    i really liked those two lines!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Very good poem, well written and flowed nicely vocabulary was great , very deep and sad feeling in it , haunting more or less, but a great write, my favorite line:
    Bow down before me,
    And plead your life.
    I am the Devils daughter,
    And you have met your demise.
    very good job, pleasure to read, your friend Tracyd
    5/5