Beautiful poetry.

Okay there were a few typos. your poem looks like this

"No one cares about me
no one knows who i am
no one'sever loved me
my life is like a scam

I do my best
i work real hard
but no one'sshere to listen
My life now feels more scard

I'm through with second thoughts
when no one's there to care
i'm through with giving out my heart
When no one is there "

and it should look like

"No one cares about me
no one knows who i am
no one's ever loved me
my life is like a scam

I do my best
i work real hard
but no one's here to listen
My life now feels more scarred

I'm through with second thoughts
when no one's there to care
i'm through with giving out my heart
When no one is there"

just thought you should know that. and i think we have all been the point of giving up. just dont be too quick to. things will get better. eventually they have to.
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