by Mel
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I think it's very good. Check out the word 'straggle' do you mean 'struggle'? |
by Jaime
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You have a pretty good start there, with a little work it will be a very nice (although somewhat sad) poem. |
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Life has lost its meaning |
by Darien
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This was a really good poem. Very sad story and I can tell you threw your emotions into it. Great job :) |
by Natalie
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This is sad. But I can relate. So I really like this piece. You expressed your emotions really clearly too. Another awesome job! Keep writing! 5/5 |
by Josh
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Ah, and i stumble upon yet another noteworthy poem of yours. |
by Megann Lee
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I like this Poem.. |