Comments : You changed

  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    The meaning of this poem really gets through to me and i can relate a lot.. it makes my tummy rumble lol haha i can think of a lot of times i have had those same thoughts... keep em coming and check out my stuff too!

    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The meaning is alright but it is repetitive in parts as in you keep repeating that he's changd. Try going into detail about what the speaker might be feeling through all this. Next you might want to try not to force the rhymes.