Wow Steph! That was really good. Long and filled with alot of emotion. I really liked it. It's different to alot of the poems I read. Not sure how, But it is. And I love it! Keep it up! && Smile! 5/5

`taleee xx

Oh my god i felt every word of that, it really got to me. That poem is soooo good!!

Again a really strong impact on your reader. Language holds a lot of power and in the hands of an expert like you it can be manipulated to produce a masterpiece. this and all your other poems prove it. keep writing.
xox