That was excellant!
I love the words you use..I know I have said this before! But that's just coz it's so true...I love your work!

Jen

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AGAIN you asked me to comment something that i have already commented once =P ... well il just comment this one again. I think i liked it better the second time around... but i dont know. It was just as good as the first time i read it. Kinda like the second time i watched Pirates of the Carribean... aaaaaanyways your a great poet -Jen-

Oooooooooooo
good poem
...mia...

Mmmm... nice try

It was a great poem, very sad. I liked it a lot, though I seem to always love almost all poems. If it's from teh heart and real i love it. Keep it up. 5/5

ravyn