Hey nice start i have to say..if if was a little longer it would of been better...but over all i liked it.....4/5...keep working on it!

I would get rid of the site error. Just edit the poem and take it out and it'll be fine. Maybe expand on it with details to bring it to life But I can't find the hidden messages lol I guess that's why they're called hidden. Overall short and sweet though

It's a little to short and there really is no pattern except the beginning letters spell 'I Love You' Nice start but try to make it longer somehow