Amazing poem.. great choice of words.. my favourite parts Silence seemed so loud I used to be so proud..
dee

Great and nice written poem it seems that we have the same feelings we both alone lol but not realy now great poem 5/5

I Like it... shows a part of my life that was so real. : ) keep up the good work.... and i'll keep commenting...
ur fan

Silence seemed so loud
I used to be so proud

My favorite part too.
You really didn't hold back your feelings on this one. I am sure it's only a matter of time before someone worth it notices you :]

Omg i just loved the whole thing :)

hanley

Good poem i like it! kinda hard to follow at times... probly cuz im listening to music lol but i was returning the favor for you commenting ^_^ thanx byeee