Oooh, well done Tim! I'm impressed at how quick this was written, it's outstanding.
I really can relate to all you convey in this...things will get better I promise! :)

Now, I'm gonna make your day by telling you my favorite parts of this brilliant poem, here they are:

"Thoughts of your face have me in tears
I have not slept in what seems like years"

"Images that break my heart within
Roses that suddenly died from grace"

I also like the two line's you ended this with. Using them twice within the poem really drives your feelings home...awesome stuff.
It amazes me the good that can come from a bad situation, know what I mean?
Love ya~Holly

It seems you have hit another nail on the head Timothy, but let me ask you this..how do you function properly?..lol Another great one from my favorite on this site. Denise

Wow this is such an amazing poem! You are so talented! I just absolutely loved this poem. My favorite stanza was:
Depression does not stand a snowball`s chance
Darkness another villain for whom to dance
My eyes too strained to correctly see
The devil at my side laughing at me
This poem was well worded & the flow & rhythm of it was perfect. Great job on this!

This was really good. Flow and rhyming were good. And the poem itself was just awesome. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

I really liked this poem. I totally understand what that's like. Awesome job :)

So sad and powerful! Incredible flow and a wonderful choice of words...

"Roses that suddenly died from grace"
^^^ Really excellent line, awesome write!

I like how it leaves the reader thinking about what you did and why you are afraid to dream. It is a mysteriouse poem, and I like that.

Hahaha nice work keep up the jokes, sasquatch ;-)
~SNUG~ peace out

Have to say i love this poem, it really captured me and i can relate in so many ways right now. looking forward to reading more of your poems xx

Amazing poem....great job~valerie

Tim, what a brilliant penned, though sad but well expression within your emotions, No dream would be a dream if it Could pass for something real, Nor would you sail for paradise Would it its shoals conceal. best wishes for you, bert.

This is such a sad poem T...and im sorry to hear your feeling so low, i think you wrote this poem perfectly and a lot of people can surely relate.

Lis **

Very powerful piece. Full of pain and turmoil. You definitely have a way of putting your feelings into words.