This is sweet
i like it

Awww.. thats adorable! i loved itt! :D keep up the amazing work (even if it does only take you 5 minutes! :P)
luff jessy
xox

It's really sweet but the rhymes can make poems feel a bit fake, this is just my opinion, even though this was a really good love poem and not full of cliche's (read too many)

Wow, I loved it. The Flow and the Ryhme was amazing. It was very well written. Keep up the awesome work.

Peace, Joe