Comments : Sink Your Fingernails Of Weeping Lead Ons.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    This wasn't as good as the other one. Some of it just seemed a bit forced? I dunno. Maybe work on it a little more and it'll be better. 5/5 though.

    `taleee xx

  • I agree with Taleee, it all did seem a bit forced!! This is not you r best poem but still good!! Work on it!! 5/5!!

  • 17 years ago

    by mechelle skillin

    I love your poem, it is a very good poem, keep up the great work

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Very abstract poetry- you have a brilliant style and I like it. This was well written its so clever how you played on the words and personality came across throught the rhetorical questions....Excellent!!

    [lost_laureate]

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Woooow! I love this poem. I would have to say its my favorite, there was so much emotion and feeling in it I jsut adore it Escpecially this Stanza.
    "Oh my, you sit and laugh.
    these words, I should have burned.
    these feelings, I should have hid.
    oh my, you sit and laugh."
    Great Write.