This was good. I liked it alot. It was short and simple. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

I really adore this poem. You really capture life in such a short moment with short words, yet you paint the picture so clear and we really get the hidden meaning. Great Job!! Keep writing.
Take Care and God Bless,
sarah-joy

I really liked this poem, it has an important message, and it's beautifully written.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Wow! Thats all i can say, im really speachless. great poem. i love it, so short so simple, but it says so much. 5/5