The title was attention getting and the concept was too, though I'm a bit tired of suicide poems. I really like the red rose, could that be a symbol of passion and love that she had not gotten as promised or just maybe a rose? It does show reality which is: Too many people become adicted to other people and when nothing goes their way they lose all faith entirely.

Nice storyline and good writing overall!
Keep it up 5/5

Nice write!! Keep it up!! 5/5

Wow. This was realy breath taking. I loved how you used 'Red Rose' That was really interesting and capitvating. An awesome job! Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

Wow hun! This poem is so depressing.

Great write. You painted a vivid picture of a sad story to your readers. Powerful and emotional. Keep up the great work! 5/5

This was a really good poem. The only thing that I didn't really like is you started off too many lines with a Pronoun. It kept repeating and repeating. Other than that, it's a very well written piece. Awesome job.

Wow!!! Really depressing but very very good writing!! Im going to read on hehe...Great job!

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Always4You

It's painfully beautiful....

I liked the poem. it was really sad.

It's good to point out it's fiction especially with suicide writes. It's not a new subject, which of course I'm disappointed with, but you wrote it well anyway. Some good emotive language in there too. Thanks for sharing.

Well written peice with some good use of language and powerful expression.

Well, you should know i love this poem! :) lol! this is just amazing, the end couldn't be more perfect! i just love it! keep up the excellent writing!

Awww how sad! yea that like happened 2 me except im not dead or suicidal. anyway, loved the poem, excellent work! 5/5

CONGRATULATIONS ON COMING 3RD IN MY COMPETITION!!!
you alread know how much ilove this poem for placing 3rd.

but i shall give you more detail on how good it was.
The emotion you drew out of the words and how you put it together was magnificent.
5/5
Emma

This was a pretty creative write for someone that doesn't cut. It was a good poem and I liked it.

Wonderful poem! I'm putting you on my favorites! This one had so much emotion and love how it switched in between the past and the present throughout! Fantastic flow too!

xxEvilAngelxx!